We are living in developing country and education is the main aspect that maintain our existence in the demographic world .Some people think that students should allow to choose the subjects which they want to read and others think that they should allow to study only that subjects which are helpful in their future for job .
To embark on, students should allow to choose the subjects which they want to read .Firstly if the student is having interest in any subject than they study that subject with full attention and do more creativity for better result .Secondly if students choose subjects by own than they select the subjects according to their ability and safe from themself from extra stress .That leads to maintain stress free and maintain good health of the student.Thirdly if the students select the subjects it enhance their personality and develop their confidence because during the study of that subjects they feel move comfortable.
However others believe that in universities and colleges only science and technology related subjects should be taught because it helps to get job in future .Firstly our all efforts from begning of study till end are only focus on bright future with high salary job so if our study was regarding our job stream than it will easy to get job. I think that students are not enough knowledge and experience to select correct stream which is good for their future .so teachers act like a guider as well as crrier counsler and help the students in good selection of subjects.
To conclude that job is the main destination of human beings and it requires good qualification and it will more impressive if students having interest in study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91578947368 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46990047025 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.242996664 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.2 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339316560914 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17528741442 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921423078456 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203687399229 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802746924361 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 11.3001002004 215% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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