Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Today social media among different age of people are getting more and more interest, whereas there is risk to share some personal information in the internet. there would seem to be clear benefits and drawbacks in to both options. By in my opinion, advantages to use social media a lot to compare to disadvantages.
To begin with, that social media has multiply functions which simplifies people's lives. Firstly, it helps to get in touch with friends who live abroad, to abreast of the news of the world, and find all useful information. Secondly, the social, media extends the limits of communication. Moreover, social media promotes dating. lots of married couples have found their special ones on social network.
On the contrary, there are those who think that social network have negative influence on human interaction. They insist that people, especially younger generation, spend too much time outline, and often avoid face-to-face communication. some of them tend to stay at home than to go for walking with their friends. Besides, plethora of people addicted to social media and live virtual life forgetting surrounding people and duties with person responsible for them. As a result, become unsociable and withdrawn, get backed or else sometime the can go astray.
In my opinion, despite the internet has a lot disadvantages there are myriad of benefits which become the life more easily.
In conclusion, social media has as well a lot benefits as drawback but advantages out weight disadvantages. Only people should use social media width reasonable, know where to stop and are not totally immersed in virtual life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77975595311 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9570023625 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361523824623 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127331748604 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961566645415 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199885359561 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932758715216 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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