The rules are the fundamental bedrocks upon which society is shaped, and they serve the purpose to ensure people, as part of that society, avoid willingly harming others. This essay agrees with this statement that the law is the key for a community to function properly.
As societies began to shape and people started to gather in larger groups and eventually building cities, there was a certain type of people, known today as outlaws, which did enjoy breaking the basic norms and traditions. To deal with them, there has to be rules and punishment to discourage them from doing so. And at some point, written rules and laws were introduced into society to handle these people. I completely agree with this idea that the functionality of society is dependant upon its rules. If there were not any laws to punish such law-breakers, such as rubbers, people would find it easier to take each other money instead of working for it. And those who enjoy raping or destroying would raise public fear and distrust, which finally could destroy a society altogether.
Furthermore, laws are essential to ensure that people are treated fairly, even those who break them. Justice systems are then the tool to do so. These systems are equipped with judges, prosecutors, and police. And these three, in turn, ensure the safety of society first, then pursue those who put other’s safety in danger and finally treat them based on the crime’s scale. A small rubbery’s punishment must significantly differ from a gunned one. A youngster with a petty crime should admittedly be treated differently from a mature one. As the justice system, using its tools, function properly, people would feel safer, leading to more trust and happiness amongst people, all of which contribute to a sounder society.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that society is a table and its legs are the laws and rules. It can only stand firm if its legs are strong well-built.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94242424242 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54301650919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5727816106 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183441437325 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555467950376 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459974692003 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103357890676 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053037149672 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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