Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Watching films become a habit many people. Majority of society members consider that enjoy foreign films very helpful in life, while others oppose this because will give disadvantages for own custom. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
The sophistication of technology was succeed make improvement in social life. In other words, entertainment that offered by foreign countries was attracted public attention and as a result resident more enjoy with what the oversea have such as generate some films. On the other hand, level of production films by foreign countries better than local state whiches from quality of picture, editing, exposure, even genre and story of it films. For example, almost all of my friend delighted with Korean films/drama because of the storyline is not borring and can not be guess it is very different with local films. So, undoubtedly that many people foremost juvenils more enjoy with another films derived from abroad.
On the other hand, society members argue that foreign film brought damage for own culture. Moreover, each teenagers that enjoying every performance of films will a bit contaminated with outside custom and as a result they prefer to follow the style of the artist even learn their language. As illustration, currently, thailand become popular in teenager circles especially in Indonesia, consequently, they always use their language and intend to study in Thailand. Thats why, foreign film will be easy to distract people's thoughts.
To conclude, both of this opinion will be better if combinated in the right way because can invent new insight for changing in future such as improve the quality of films.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: succeeded
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Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24163568773 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63805400253 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4021840842 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212333975163 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741350165523 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533477365463 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131913517894 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476818011109 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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