Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether the protection of environment are under responsibility of government or of people. In my opinion, while individuals have some responsibilities, the prior duty is belong to governments.
Each people are responsible to decrease their carbon print. When they decrease the carbon usage, most environmental problems will start to decrease. For this reason, people can start with using glass products instead of plastics which will result in stop production of plastics because of less demand. People also limit their unneccessary paper, water and electric usage. Smart usage of them will definetly save trees and water resources which are essential element of our environment. As a result, when individual take a role in saving environment, it will spread to factories and other communities then this movement trigger to reverse effects of global warming and other environmental problems.
On the other hand, even individual role is important, without government force is impossible to sustain better environment. Governments have power to control factories and impose law for protection of environment. Factories can be supported financially and giving tax advantages in order to produce and use environmental friendly products which will lead to common use among people. Governments can also establish relationships with other developed countries in order to make protocol for environment such as Kyoto and they also can help underdeveloped nations in terms of educational, financial and technical support. Without international support, it does not possible to protect environment. As a result, government have enough power to control and lead everything related with the environment.
In conclusion, although it is important to take place in environment protection as an individual, governments responsibilities are higher and they have enough power to allocate their resources to provide green environment for public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...ome responsibilities, the prior duty is belong to governments. Each people are resp...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...prior duty is belong to governments. Each people are responsible to decrease thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23776874757 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.184062588 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244959396545 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830372463413 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460354412268 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148310382881 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228464932885 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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