in recent decades, global warming and problems of environment have increased which are significant concerns for countries. However, some believe that government should consider this trouble merely, I think both of society and government have responsibilities to protect the environment.
On the one hand, majority of negative impacts of human activities on environment are obvious that should be controlled. For instant, air contamination, pollution of stream banks are prevalent examples that we can see in our daily routine. In fact, for number of these problems, there are some useful solutions that enough budget and management are required. Government have this duty and they should legislate restricted rules for using fossil fuels (high level of devastated factor) specially for factories and autoes which produce toxic substances from natural resources. Besides, government can invest in planting trees and constructing parks for public which are useful for reduction of air pollution. In addition, knowledge of environment preservation should be instructed in educational institutions to aware people how we can save our planet.
On the other hand, we cannot underestimate how people's actions can affect our environment. It is a commonplace matter that myriad trees are logging annually due to businesses and trades. We can see that how number of animals are decreased and some of them become extinct. All of these illustrations are related to human activity which are ignored and there are no controls to handle these harmful situations. Fortunately, some people build international environmental agencies as volunteer members to protect the earth. These kinds of deeds from people can reduce the damaged aspects dramatically that only people can cope it together.
In conclusion, the burden of protecting planet and environment is related to government and people. The earth will be in a catastrophic occasion with helping none of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in recent decades, global warming and prob...
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Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...and management are required. Government have this duty and they should legislate res...
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Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...and management are required. Government have this duty and they should legislate res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55369127517 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05562480272 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7890392319 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208826213591 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627968908233 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605520735459 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127902290566 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731890546078 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.