Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympic wastes money, which could be used for important issues.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The Olympic games are the biggest display of our inclination towards sports. It not only brings sportsmen from different parts of the world together to compete but also serves as a platform to strengthen the international relationships between countries. While some believe that these games are an excellent opportunity for people from different countries to interact, there are others who consider that the Olympic games, being very expensive are a waste of financial resources and this money shall be used for many other vital issues. In this essay, I would like to discuss the merits and demerits of these two contrasting opinions and would like to clarify my stand regarding this.
To begin with, right from the beginning of the Olympic games, more than a century ago, in Athens, the Olympic games gained popularity among individuals. I have witnessed a few Olympic events myself and I can say that indeed, there could be no better display of sportsmanship on earth than these games. These events also provide an international platform for many less popular games like water polo, synchronized swimming, curling, and many more. To host an Olympic event, the venue has to be up to the standards set by the International Olympic Committee, and in doing so, the whole city experiences a faster and targeted growth in terms of infrastructure and employment. Also, during the long Olympic events, there is a considerable financial opportunity for the host city and country.
On the other hand, arranging state-of-the-art infrastructure, hosting hundreds of nations and their thousands of athletes, and setting up numerous game venues, cost a huge amount of money. There are people who believe that in place of hosting an Olympic event by redirecting the major chunk of financial resources towards it, the governments shall focus on developing basic needs like education, health, and defense.
To conclude, I would like to say that although these ace sporting events are very expensive to conduct and this money could be useful in developing other vital amenities, Olympics indeed helps in the development of these infrastructures in a long run and it creates a lot of local employment opportunities. Besides all this, these events are a feast for the eyes, a delight to watch, and inspiring for a sportsman to be a part of it. Hence it must be conducted in its full glory and excitement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ing for a sportsman to be a part of it. Hence it must be conducted in its full glory ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, regarding, so, then, while, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10178117048 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93971658213 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547073791349 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4161933332 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.214285714 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29842743604 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980313886072 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705345155033 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178169042192 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754881068933 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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