Some cities have few control over design and construction on housing and office buildings. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In these days, house style has aroused people’s discussion. In many countries, the authority has not manipulated the way houses designed and built strictly. It argued by some that the government should give the residents the liberty to decide on how their houses look. In my opinion, i hang onto a notion that its advantages can overshadow the disadvantages.
This trend certainly exerts some detrimental implication to general aesthetics of the city. Architecture-wise, in all likelihood, the owners do not have the knowledge of construction, therefore, there would be not any standard in the erected houses, thus, the houses would be unappealing and effect on the facade of the city to some extent. Vietnam is a case in a point. There are a variety of house styles in Vietnam and the distribution of them is unreasonable, such as a run-down house located next to a luxury one, which makes the country look chaos.
There are, however, some dazzling advantages can easily overshadow the disadvantages of this tendency. Firstly, building houses basing on the owners’ passion and creativity could sharpen their sense of comfortable. Truly, they can consider the house as their own fortune, which mark their personal imprints and have a pride on that. Secondly, owning an unique house style can be considered as one of the optimal ways to promoting sale and attract customer. For example, the peculiar style of Eiffel tower in Paris has become a prevalent iconic of the city, which draw millions of tourists each year.
In conclusion, i would concede that people should receive the permission to build their houses depending on their own perceives. Although it does come with adverse effect, yet the benefits created by it far eclipse the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19860627178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98281040486 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4247870413 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153038643811 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465504087358 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343624092933 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867578538007 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323758470272 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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