Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree
Indeed, it is true that few nations are affected by the hike in the amount of crime happening in day-to-day life. Hence citizens of those affected countries believe that by recruiting more police personal on the street can reduce the crime.
Best way to solve any problem is to find the root cause of that problem. If we fail in that and then giving whatever the solution just acts as a temporary cover up for that particular solution. So in my opinion by just increasing police and deputing them in every corner of the city doesn’t yield fruitful result.
As I already mentioned earlier that we need to find the root cause of every problem, so once you know the cause then we can choose an efficient solution to curb the crime. Furthermore crimes can also be reduced by educating the people about the moral values, specifically by inculcating the moral values related topics in our education system. Additionally, another way of bringing down the crime rate is by making laws stricter by giving more severe punishment to criminals. Which may 'cause the sense of nervousness in the criminals.
In addition to this even by making use of technology in the city can make a big difference in bringing down the crime rate. Equipment such as CCTV, sensors, any safety instruments which reduces the communication gap between the police and the public can become handy in bringing crime rate down.
In other end by increasing police personal will increase the job opportunities with that it also increases expenses. We need to provide training to the police professionals, their salaries, maintenance, and deployment of vehicles. After all this, without use of technology it’s very difficult to reduce the crime.
To sum it up, by increasing police personal in the streets may fetch some good results in reducing crimes but it may not be most economical and efficient one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, after all, in addition, such as, you know, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91482649842 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7228452209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4847228847 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293324108312 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895781016571 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634258415385 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145690332654 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04714805074 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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