In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
what do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be tackled to solve them
The lifestyle of human beings has being changed from the pasts, and thanks to technology growth, grasping basic necessities of life are becoming more convenient than any time. Obesity, can have variety of reasons, and the only thing that can help to avoid extra weight is to change and to leave some wrong habits.
Today’s people prefer to use public transport systems and private cars rather than walking or biking to their workplaces. However, it is not their fault because long distances lead to the use of vehicles. Therefore, they have to travel long distances without any enough energy consumption, and this causes fatness and obesity or gaining extra weight. Furthermore, majority of them sit on seats for a long time with no movement causing body’s extra calories produce extra fat.
Another reason can be wrong food habits in societies. Unfortunately, people don’t pay much attention for their health and the kinds of food which they consume. Fast foods are engineering processed foods and are more harmful than variety of traditional foods but they are comparatively eaten.
Lack of movement among people should be considered as a significant issue. However, for solving this problem, fundamental infrastructures are needed. For example, for short distances of workplace, special exercising rooms should be considered with tutors to help them.
Wrong food habits should be stoped by proper education in schools. Also, manufacturers and food industry sectors should be supervised accurately by experts. Furthermore, governments should foster people to think more about their health and inform them to not use genetic manipulation foods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...d thanks to technology growth, grasping basic necessities of life are becoming more convenient th...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use genetic manipulation foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49420849421 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76204569275 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2963795162 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156929439153 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537015424911 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030852269431 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083395180024 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219622350462 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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