People throughout the world are dramatically confronting with obesity in line with drop in healthiness and fitness. I strongly believe the mentioned issue due to the fact both lifestyle and the food quality have faced a serious change so far.
Firstly, by having alteration in the way people live, they have lost their activity in this sphere. With respect to Advent of new-technology, human being not oriented to less physical activities, but also opt to low level mind preoccupation. For example, prior to this, human being especially businessman performed their calculation by abacus demanding more focus and mind involvement. Nevertheless, nowadays, existence of sophisticated instruments such as smart cellphones, laptops and calculations lead to doing these processes mere over some seconds no matter how overwhelming they are.
In term of physical activities, mechanizing the mean of life, people have less to do to be more fitting and healthy. As a transparent example, our ancestors used to walk or cycling when wanted to get to their destinations or workplaces. In addition, they took advantage of human-forces in order to handle their tasks. So obesity was a rare phenomenon. As a result, People should not be surprise to see this great deal of over weighting in their societies. Of course, they could not step-back, mankind could do regular daily sport exercise make up for it.
Secondly, when it comes to nutrition, it is obvious that it was not an exceptional conversion. In this era, people spend less their time on cooking and they more have tendency to eat fast-food or dishes that do not contain sufficient nutrient are required by body to be healthy.
Furthermore, food companies care more about their privileges than people healthiness. Thus, they produce some sorts of things formed out of artificial or chemical materials. Therefore, it would contribute to hazardous sickness, to say nothing of greasy and sugar-coated foods. Something had to be done regarding people bad eating habit with help of social media or TV. They should be informed about the upcoming downsides and censuring the culprits in advertising for juvenile viewers. Besides, recognizing powerful opponents in the food industry who resist control is inevitable.
To put it into a nutshell, it would be definitely wise if people put routine sports activities in their timetables to overcome this inactivity. On the other hand, heads of the nations ought to take vigorous action with regard to boosting people awareness about outcomes of bad eating habit and put more supervision over food industries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, of course, such as, as a result, with regard to, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28192771084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99044784979 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612048192771 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4822863619 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16080679147 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441153475091 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352300222568 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804277627332 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430370810369 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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