In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politician enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?
One considerable aspect of people’s working life is about their retirement age. Although in some societies individuals at younger ages like 50 years old are forced to retire, in other countries they could able to work for more years until 70. I myself believe working people until the old ages has gained several benefits, therefore, the appropriate age for employees to stop working is 60 or even higher.
To commence with, working until the old ages has had some satisfying result not only for workers, but also for the countries. The first one is for people who would feel content about themselves. In fact, if an employee stops working at the young ages such as 50 where they are still capable of carry out lots of difficult activities, they will be devastated and feel unsatisfied about their life. Moreover, as a result of their laziness and feeling old, their health disease may appear and pose a threat into their life. Consequently, this issue would not affect just on individuals’ lives, there would be lots of elderly people who are suffered from various kinds of disease in societies that requires lots of health facilities which would be difficult duty for governments to provide.
In addition, another significant reason could be to use the aged people’s working experiences for various parts of companies. This action has been absolutely vital not only for companies to make bigger profit by utilizing their abilities, but also it has been effective to teach youngsters who have just graduated and would need lots of help and learning courses. So, companies can hire both old and young workers in order to use diverse kinds of abilities from them in order to gain more success. Furthermore, old employees could educate lots of skills which they have learnt by years of working to early graduates while they are still in business.
In conclusion, although some humans think old people have not been able to work properly, authorities could use them not only for teaching younger employees, but also for declining the numbers of them who might be diagnosed with some illnesses by giving them good emotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00842696629 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60645551268 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542134831461 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6128330608 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221716491058 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911816559023 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601224094708 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147107284167 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792843429612 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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