In some countries children start school at the age of four and in the other countries at the age of seven. Some people believe that early school start is affecting parent child relationship. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion
In many countries,it is recommended that children should start education from the the age of four,while,in some other parts of world,formal education begins when a child reaches seven or eight years of age. From my personal perspective, I agree that starting education earlier will greatly benefit both individuals and society.
A good reason to set up studying at four years old is that it gives a large amount of advantages to kid's mind. In other words, the first five years in the life of children are the most crucial for their brain development. Actually, they can learn from both parents and teachers because their minds are highly impressionable and they can learn at a faster pace. A recent research showed that children who started formal education at an early age had better cognitive ability and outperformed their counterparts even in adolescence.
Another point to consider is that if young people start education early,they will complete it ahead of time. Admittedly,after finishing school they will have a chance to work and earn money which helps their family. As a result,young graduates will save their valuable time which they can spend for another important things.
Finally, beginning formal education at age of four will benefit society in the long run,for the simple reason that it will increase the number of young workers who are much more intellectual and creative than elders. As a matter of fact,having a greater resource of modern skilled and knowledgeable professionals will only bring greater rewards to society as a whole.
To sum up, starting education at early ages is a must for any country that values modernized employees and one that wishes to advance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, so, while, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14801444043 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87321985844 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0977500066 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254403227697 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859493525113 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715802547239 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136937831808 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680008232783 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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