In some countries criminal cases in law courts are shown in the telivision so that general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this present time, crime has become a major issue in the world. So, therefore most of the television news telecast the criminal cases on the television for the society. So this essay shall analyse the merits as well as demerits of this case in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are multifarious rationales which describes the advantages of the criminal hearings on the television. The first point is that it creates the awareness among the society as the people gain insight about it and they know the different types of criminal activities which is going in their country. Not only this, due to the telecast of the criminal trials on the television help to the public that they become alert about it. Further, it creates the fear in the mind of the criminal as they see the culprit in the court who suffer from depression. Furthermore, when the criminal activities telecast on the television so ut makes the transparency and the people get to know about the laws of the nation.
On the other hand, there are myriad drawbacks of this case. The prime one is that, it creates the violence among the society which can disturb the peace of the society for an instance as, when the culprits are very prominent so their supporters creates the violence in the public places. However, the cameras in the court can pervert the court hearings and judges are unable to take the suitable judgements.
In addition to this.when the television show the real faces of the culprits so it disrupt their identity but the victims get unnecessary publicity which can hampers their privacy and they face the questions of the public in the society. Moreover, children are the vulnerable section of the society so these type of criminals trials puts a negative impacts on their mentality.
I feel that there are many disadvantages in comparison to the advantages so the court hearings should confidential as well as the authorities should take a harsh action against the telecast of the criminal cases on the television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64183896978 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468023255814 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1599846648 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219863491898 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774166722554 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395172266137 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128069756056 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257652918571 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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