In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the age gap between parents and their children is getting wider, unlike in the past when it was significant. Despite the drawbacks of this are varied, in my opinion, the upsites can justify these.
On the one hand, one of the primary advantages of having a distant space between parents and chilren age is about the financial problem, In terms of the former, in today's society, due to the development of economic, the standard of living and social requirments are increasing, make it difficults to living. Therefore, having a steady financial will assist existence with being more steady and less pressure. Espeacially, when parents have babies, they could invest all the money that they have earned in different necessities such as toys, clothes, all of which lays the foundation for the early growth of children. In contrast, if parents have kids at an early age, they may not have well-prepared to take care for their childs. Another feasible explanation is that older parents might be more qualified in raising chilren. This means that they gain more experience in life and work, making them better prepared for being a parent.
On the other hand, the wider age gap between generations would pose a problem to the different views on many issues included study, job, or even lifestyle. Admittedly, parents and their children can find it diffuclt to reach agreements and tackle problems. As a result, family conflicts can arise among members, which leads to collapse and disconnection in family relationships. For example, children would evaluate their future carrer and work based on their personsal preferences, while parents tend to give priority to realistic factors such as salary and stability.
In conclusion, after all arguments are discussed, I believe that the drawbacks are less important than various positive aspect which make it get along better in family relationships
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, after all, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18566775244 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75049754889 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3749624818 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169926138771 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588819544016 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597647955235 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10096174569 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507274923892 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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