In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in
What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?

Common sense seems to dictate that the history of construction and buildings is being noticed. There are many reasons for this trend and people can find information about their houses in various ways.

It is understandable why people should concentrate on history more, not only the history of construction but also the areas. First of all, historical events and the length of its make people feel proud. For example, Ngo Quyen high school in Hai Phong city is one of the oldest schools in Viet Nam and due to that, the school attracted more students to enroll. Students in Ngo Quyen high school are very proud of their school because of its history, honorable and prestigious. Secondly, more and more people find out history can lead to a famous trend. To catch up with the trend and not be “outdated” people tend to search for information about their buildings’ history. All in all, two reasons make people focus on history, their pride in history and the need to keep pace with the famous trend.

The way people find data about history is immense. To know the history of their houses they should understand the area where they live first. This helps people to figure out history easier and clearer. Profound information is on the Internet so people can access it whenever they want and it is all free. To illustrate, even a child can search for information, all he needs are just a device that is connected to the Internet. Data on the Internet are free to access. Moreover, people can ask their grandparents or ancestors for information. They are probably knowing much about the past time when they are younger. Listening to historical stories from grandparents is the most attractive way to understand history. The way they reported the history is really interesting. In short, information about history is attainable and everyone can research it without any difficulties or hurdles.

To summarize, raising awareness of history is a good trend that people responding to it. Many reasons caused this trend and varied ways to follow it.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ents or ancestors for information. They are probably knowing much about the past time when they are ...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...hey are probably knowing much about the past time when they are younger. Listening to his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in short, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92795389049 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67047940881 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495677233429 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.066218215 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402940857455 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123123593381 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933612947657 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246558251644 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068439448329 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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