In recent years, many people have chosen to live alone. One of the reasons that may lead to this choice is that people want to escape from family duties and regulations. In this essay, I will discuss the latter view, mentioning the merits and demerits of this decision.
in my opinion, people seek to live alone to free themselves from any responsibilities towards their families. To clarify, parents always impose some rules on their children to bring up polite well-mannered adults. As a result of this, some of these adults tend to find this method as an obstacle to their freedom. Hence, they start to live alone away from their families in the pursuance of achieving liberty.
On the one hand, living lonely will help people to be self-dependent persons. For example, if these individuals do not have someone to rely on, they will be their own saviors in all situations and conditions. Therefore, they are going to be able to deal with difficult circumstances without any worries or hesitations.
on the flip side, being lonely may lead to hazardous psychiatric illnesses. depending on a result of recent research that was made by a group of Russian scientists, 50% of people who try to commit suicide are living without any companion. Thus, the lack of interaction with other people may result in an extreme depression which may lead to death.
To recapitulate, people opt to live individually seeking liberty. Meanwhile, this choice could result in independent persons capable of facing hard live conditions, they may be subjected to some psychological diseases that can have a deleterious effect on their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86481900452 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7960891719 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207717387406 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765108268693 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514739938849 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120551125765 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462607066662 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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