In some countries more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this question

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in

What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

In many nations, where people who buy built houses, are eager to know more about the evolution of these architectural creations since history repeats over time, and they find related information through involving elderly people in the neighbourhood and news articles.

Firstly, to begin with, history has been presenting similar incidents happening repeatedly since the begging of life while providing much information on the natural incidents, yet they can be very helpful in avoiding them ahead. As an example, when a house is situated close to a river, but due to the development of present irrigation systems, there may be no flood warning made for at least in the last century. However, if they are aware of the disastrous climate changes that can be repeating over the years, they can take precautions towards saving their lives. As a result, such incidents may not only help to save owners but also many of the lives in the neighbourhood.

Secondly, looking in the libraries for journals and newspapers as well as talking to adults will give much information in researching about the past. This can be much easier when talking to the natives of the respective area those who may be much older. These are the precious resources of all time that can get accurate information. Moreover, studying old newspapers and journals will provide valuable and documented evidence, yet an online resource may not be reliable in gathering details about historical events. Therefore, written and oral evidence will help in searching pre-historic data of a house.

In conclusion, reading past events can be much useful when dealing with critical environmental changes, yet these resources can be found in books and articles rather than in electronic media.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80364840097 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6343561451 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4545454545 7.06120827912 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166955650305 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568998515898 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442983115668 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097821459715 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049091502928 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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