In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a hotly debated issue today related to whether it’s beneficial or not for young adult to continuously living with their parents when they finished school and have a job. In my opinion, I strongly agree that its drawbacks outweigh merits.
One of the main disadvantages for this phenomenon is the restriction of developments and activities. This is because children are always under the control of parent. They must follow whatever their parents order them to do. Consequently, these individuals are easily to suffer from a difficulty when making decisions and they are more likely to mirror other people.
Another drawback is that those who living at their parents’ house are over-reliant, hence they may develop a poor sense of social skills. For example, as to household duties, children are free from household task, that’s why the majority of adults at present do not know how to cook, clean the house and do laundry. This inflicts a serious harm when they move out end build their own house.
On the other hand, there are also some merits of living with parents. One of the key benefits is that it enables them to save a great deal of money as they do not have to spent on renting a house, electricity, water and many living expenses. Furthermore, people can use this money to pay for other activities like travelling to have fun and enjoy life.
In conclusion, although there are some undisputed advantages for adults to live in parents’ house, I believe that they are pale in comparison with the drawbacks. This is because that their development can be limited and lead to the lack of social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92553191489 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72051459063 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1519529465 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344829919545 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113268006356 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088525663453 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195067779086 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616814669185 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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