In some countries, online shopping is gradually replacing in-store shopping. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative impacts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In some countries, the question of whether online shopping should replace brick and mortar stores or not has received a great deal of public attention. Although online shopping has some problems, the merits will negate the drawbacks.
There are several disadvantages for citizens to believe that online shopping should not replace in-store shopping. first, since people can not touch and experience their good physically, they can be able to have some risks at shopping. In fact, some shop will send inferior products to buyers to earn a fortune in deceptive way, which results in frustration's users. Second, by placing order and completing online transaction, the majority of people will be able to being victimized of hi-tech crime, like ID thief. this means that all profile of users will be sent to seller and hacker can steal this information, which leads to users' information will be invaded and used for evil purposes.
there are, however, the upside of online shopping can easily overshadow its downside. first, in order to save a great deal time, people can consider online shopping as the best choice. For example,with the pace of hectic life today, the majority of people can use online shopping to order food in case they have a number of other work needed to finish, which helps them get more done. Second,if people are in situations that they can not go out, they can use online shopping to place order food and other necessities of life. For instance, due to the adverse impact of epidemic Covid 19, people need to stay at home to protect them and society so online shopping becomes potential way to shopping, which play an integral part of online shopping in the world these days.
In conclusion, we can not deny that both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, I side with online shopping is positive and it is also advisable that we should consider both way of shopping in each sitation to choose the best choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...g should not replace in-store shopping. first, since people can not touch and experie...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...imized of hi-tech crime, like ID thief. this means that all profile of users will be...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... invaded and used for evil purposes. there are, however, the upside of online shop...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ing can easily overshadow its downside. first, in order to save a great deal time, pe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...shopping as the best choice. For example,with the pace of hectic life today, the majo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
..., which helps them get more done. Second,if people are in situations that they can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90273556231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52652524069 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2362710861 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288958059706 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113649862043 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565894699605 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190483036676 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476989740573 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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