In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
Accommodation has become the prioritized choice for people before residing in a place. Meanwhile, citizens of some nations find it pivotal to possess their own house in lieu of living in a rental one. Although this situation brings about some financial and environmental problems to people, I still believe that it is a positive trend due to the sense of ease and comfort that it serves.
The tendency to own a house can be taken into consideration as a noticeable problem. This preference can cause people to be heavily in debt thanks to them allocating all their funds and even borrowing a huge amount of budget from the banks to purchase or construct a new house. In addition, if individuals are inclined to have their new house constructed, more and more trees will be cut down and the area of land and forests will be minimized, leading to the lack of accommodation of a variety of animals and plants. Seen in this light, this situation somewhat has a detrimental impact on people’s lives.
Nevertheless, the advantages that owning a private living place provides convincingly makes it no more a negative circumstance. Spending time in their own house is apparently more comfortable than in a place that does not belong to their ownership as people can freely work or do physical activities without any hesitation because of fear of damaging the walls or the grounds. Furthermore, unless people have a private house, they cannot decorate their house the way they desire to, which makes the living environment become dull and tedious. For instance, there are many people reported to pay the cost for the master of the house they rent since they damage the place while playing with their children or doing aerobics. Therefore, it is more convenient for people to own a home.
In conclusion, albeit some problems of finance and environment that the situation of owning a home causes, I hold a firm belief that it is an acceptable circumstance due to the aforementioned reasons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93154761905 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88516608173 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9142385108 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166255033076 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636074235325 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407986193086 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102067785229 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312873124014 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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