Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Life is full of trouble, so there are numerous hard situations that people would face. While it is claimed by some individuals that there is no way to overcome them, others hold a firm belief that people should strive for a better future rather than ignoring their problems. Although the former view is understandable, I consider the later one as more convincing.
On the one hand, it is apparent why individuals find accepting an unfavorable circumstance the best choice. Indeed, there is a myriad of people who are determined and strive to have a crowning achievement but they have failed a significant amount of times, which leads them to impatience and desperation. Therefore, they would never think of trying anymore. In addition to this, in underprivileged nations, citizens know that they can do nothing except waiting for their government to help them.
On the other hand, there are visible reasons why people always advise those who are in trouble to endeavor to enhance their desperate status. They think that as humans, we all face the dilemma of being in bad situations at least once in our entire life, so in lieu of accepting them, we should do our utmost to enhance them and live a great life that everyone who never quits trying deserves. An unsatisfactory job or the lack of money can all be tackled if individuals are patient and determined to come up with an idea to handle them, which is clearly better than living the life that they do not expect for the rest of their life.
To recapitulate, whereas some people believe in the opinion that we should accept our life even if it is full of sorrow, there are opposers of this view claiming that we should never stop trying to change our life to a better one and I advocate them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, at least, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72964169381 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64535225854 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8142821204 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174796027832 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641807152589 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383580756202 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110445054623 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296710813 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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