In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is more important for people. Why might this be so? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Housing is an essential need to humanity. In some nations, being a house owner rather than being a tenant is more vital for people. There are possible reasons for this, this essay will discuss the probable reasons why this might be so, it will also explain why it is a negative development.
To begin, one possible reasons that favours landlordship is that a house is an asset that appreciate overtime. This is so because, although, constant mentainance is a requirement for a building to survive for decades, its value appreciate overtime. For example, in a survey carried out in 2008 by the National Housing commission in Nigeria, it was estimated that Real Estate Dealers make more than 50% profit from selling a building, and this doubles the actual cost spent its construction. This instance apposite the above claim. Additionally, the comfort and peace of mind derive from being a home owner is immeasurable. Reason being that, the house is designed according to his desires and needs, and most importantly, the landlord spends no money on rent.
Furthermore, the detrimental effect of this development is that the ecosystem suffers the consequences. This is because natural habitats such as the forest, deforestation; dams, filled up with sands and gravels and wildlife are also destroyed. This is exemplified by the research conducted by the National Geography wild and environmental conservation in 2015, it was estimated that in year 2030 lives and property will be disrupted by flood in most countries of West Africa. And that Lagos state of Nigeria will be mostly affected due to the destruction of the environment by man for building purposes.
In conclusion, it is an established fact that shelter is the one of the most basic need of man, and some people feel that owning a house is more important than renting one. This essay discussed the reason for this believe which is the fact that, a house is an asset that appreciate overtime. It also looked into the negative aspect namely, the destruction of ecosystem.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02662721893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87252511063 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5561371497 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377831475429 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108215476051 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792823055176 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235225768244 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762047419034 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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