In many countries, to own a property is considered superior than to take it on lease, especially when it comes to accommodation. There might be various causes behind this notion and this essay will deliberate them along with a conclusion, whether this perspective comes with more pros or cons.
The one belief that supporters of this ideology have is that owning a home means that person is wealthier and as the majority of judgements passed on a person's character is based on the amount of wealth he/she owns, ownership of property leads to a conception that the person is rich and therefore reputed in society. Moreover, it is well known that renting an apartment to live comes with various drawbacks.For instance, the stress of paying deluge dinero, constant distress of sorting out priorities to keep up with the bills, and so on, keeps the person depressed and unable to invest money in something that pleases him/her.
Even though having a home under one's possession appears to be an appealing ideology, yet it comes with some demerits. How can a person afford to own a house in the times of inflation of land fares and taxes? If a person spends whole of his lifetime's income in buying the land and then constructing his four-walled building to live in, he will be deprived of other requirements like education, food, career life and so on.
Furthermore, owning a home does not only means to build it, it also has other necessities to sustain like maintenace, taxes and all kinds of monthly and annual bills. According to a newspaper article on finances published in 2019, more than 70% of people all over the world have lower income than the amount of money required to pay their maintenance bills.
To conclude, owning a home is beneficial only for those who can afford the expensive lifestyle and in majority of the cases, it appears to be a negative notion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...o own a property is considered superior than to take it on lease, especially when it...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... the majority of judgements passed on a persons character is based on the amount of wea...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nt to live comes with various drawbacks.For instance, the stress of paying deluge d...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...urthermore, owning a home does not only means to build it, it also has other necessit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83281733746 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70708646898 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3687777982 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.1 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191677252913 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705486622456 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454597779244 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102910682157 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402103266294 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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