In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for some people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In the tireless quest for improved standards of life, humankind has always prioritized accommodation. Some cultures idealize house ownership over rental, the driving forces of which will be discussed in this essay before a personal standpoint is put forward.
Owning a house firstly offers tremendous tangible benefits. A homeowner is entitled to the freedom of customizing their living space to their interests. As the whole process is under the owner’s control, from interior design to furniture purchase, the dwelling can be aesthetically and architecturally compatible with their preferences. This brings more satisfaction than living in the fixed space of a leased apartment. Additionally, housing costs are relatively consistent when having a house. While tenants have to deal with potential rent increase and exaggerated water and electricity price imposed by landlords, homeowners’ cost remains stable with a monthly mortgage payment.
In parallel with such tangible merits, private-house owners also reap the intangible benefits of their possession. From the cultural perspective, house ownership is traditionally ascribed to stability. Approaching a certain age, homeownership is a critical criterion for a man to be considered fully mature. In Vietnam, where such an ideology is prevalent, having a house, along with buying a car and getting married, is regarded as a major milestone in a man’s life.
Attractive as the concept of homeownership seems, however, ramifications of this trend shall not be overlooked. The aforementioned attribution of possessing a dwelling to a sense of security is a detrimental social construct, which pressurizes young adults into taking out a mortgage without the ability to pay it off. This is further exacerbated by the skyrocketing real estate values and the struggle to make ends meet, especially in metropolises. Consequently, both physical and mental well-being of the house possessor is undermined.
To conclude, despite the considerable advantages that owning a home brings about compared to renting one, a person needs to be financially and emotionally prepared to possess such a property. The absence of thorough considerations may result in unbearable burdens for homeowners, especially young ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73076923077 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34409711876 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1300337247 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.611111111 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145696652476 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394538079461 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405276252276 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780983422933 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330471428567 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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