In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.
In this money-driven world, people tend to judge others by their material possessions. Because of that, owning a house is considered to be a neccesary approach that prove their stability, wealth and success. However, in my opinion, whether it is a positive or negative situation depends on several underlying factors.
To begin with, having a residence allows people to have an independent life. The key ractionale is that people can live their life without any restrictions of the landlord. For example, they have the autonomy of modifying their own house with no fear of violating the renting contract for damaging the walls, making it the cozy place that they can feel a sense of security and familiarity when going home. Moreover, not only is house a place to reside, it represents the owner's social status. The size of the house is proportional with people's wealth. Inherently, it acts as an indicator of success, therefore, it is largely justifiable why people in our society place significant importance on possessing a residence.
However, whether owning a house is a positive situation still maintains controversy as it is due to each individual's circumstance. If people fully had financial capability to afford a residence as well as different types of fee and bill that come along with it, owing a house would definitely be a pleasant situation. On the contrary, if some middle class families bought big house which is often out of their budget with a view to meeting the social standard, it seems to be an unpleasant approach. They fund this by taking out huge loans and end up repaying the amount over a period of time when the interest has already increased exponentially. In addition to this, they also have to pay property taxes and insurance, not to mention the maintanance costs and other daily expenses.
In conclusion, although having a house as a personal asset is of great importance but it is not an infallible element to lead a pleasant life. Only when buying a house within a budget is that a positive situation. Otherwise, it could turn into a negative situation when the loan people get is beyond their repaying capacity.
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95580110497 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88458112698 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5341234832 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.529411765 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187630872505 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565136635967 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028669115377 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116253406579 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242709336568 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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