In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

Some people hold the opinion that they should buy a home; however, others opine to rent a home. This essay delves into the matter further and reaches a logical conclusion at the end.
I do not think that being homeownership is a brilliant idea. When people spend their money around buying a home, indeed, they cut their chance to live in a flourishing economy. Hence, the money which should have been invested in the stock market is wasted by purchasing an accommodation. In addition, living in a repetitive place is boring. In this way, people miss the chance to try out staying at various locations and different cities.
However, numerous people have a big preference to have their own house because it is a kind of investment in some countries. For example, some countries like Qatar do not have enough space to construct new homes, so buying a house is smart. Furthermore, rent payments are a gigantic nightmare for many residents in big cities like London or Tehran. When people have a better well-being life that they do not have any concerns to pay heavy rents. So purchasing a house is the best approach to eliminate the abovementioned difficulty.
In conclusion, buying a house has become an essential thing for living for a majority of people; however, it will have some adverse repercussions.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...he stock market is wasted by purchasing an accommodation. In addition, living in a repetitive pl...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts in big cities like London or Tehran. When people have a better well-being life th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86547085202 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79348083233 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2228314227 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203235058557 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686660175338 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475644383191 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119458338691 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318534254916 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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