In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is true that many people prefer buying instead of renting a house. It may have several reasons, and I think its positive effects are more than negative ones.
People in some nations tend to have a home and not pay rent. Firstly, the economy in some countries is not stable, and the price of houses can have significant growth suddenly. In that case, people would like to buy a house and not be concerned about the price fluctuations. Secondly, if individuals own a house, they can refurbish and design it in a way they are interested in. However, when a home is rented for some time, the owner might not let residents make any changes. Finally, buying a house is a kind of money investment for many people, and whenever they face a serious financial problem, the houses can be sold and the money would be spent on that particular issue.
Purchasing accommodation could be a favorable situation for the majority of citizens. For example, when they retire, they will not have anxiety about the amount of money they should pay every month, and can live with fewer concerns. Furthermore, aged people can have welfare and spend their pension on other situations such as travelling, getting health care and providing new home appliances. For example, many old people in my country do not have enough pension so that they cannot afford the rent of the place they live.
In conclusion, some people find it essential to have a house of their own rather than paying rent monthly. Some reasons have caused this issue, and I believe that owning a home is more beneficial than renting one in many countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74642857143 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50940831712 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8239032047 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30577993643 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109753765725 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625442068818 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188669210125 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620922909288 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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