The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that governing the world by an integrated government would be more beneficial than having a national government for each country. In my opinion, presence of just one government for all nations has more advantages than having a particular government in every country.
The advantages of having one government all around the world can be considered in several fields. Protecting the environment is one of the crucial issues in which almost all countries are concerned. Because of some nations' lack of environmental laws, many problems would happen for all living creatures. For example, using fossil fuels results in increasing air pollution, which treats people’s lives. Therefore, a unique law should be legislated for all nations around the world to control fossil fuels consumption. Another advantage of establishing just one government for all people can be mentioned as developing fast. It means that people can get together easily and collaborate in various areas. For instance, scientists can work together in a specific field and develop their researches faster than working individually.
However, governing all nations in the same way might cause a lot of disagreements since individuals' beliefs, religiose, and ideologies are very distinctive. In other words, people living in the same area usually have most in common rather than people living in a faraway country. As a result, the same legislation for almost everyone would cause some troubles, such as political conflicts. For example, the leaders of Asian nations take different politics for managing the country compared to European presidents.
In conclusion, establishing a worldwide government can have both pros and cons. From my point of view, the advantages of having just one government with authority all around the world outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49122807018 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99854484048 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1242603421 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414161888623 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13980820486 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110907512769 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277920739126 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104289933247 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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