In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is true that many people prefer to buy their own homes, instead of paying rent as a tenant. There are several reasons why people make this choice, and I believe that the desire to own a home is something positive.
In my opinion, there are two main reasons why someone may want to own rather than rent a house. The first reason is the security that home ownership gives people. Whereas renters are at the mercy of landlords who can evict tenants at short notice, owners have no such worries, and may feel a greater sense of long-term stability. Another good reason to buy instead of rent a home is that properties can be seen as an asset and an investment. My own house, for example, has risen in value since I bought it, and I have paid off a proportion of my mortgage, which means that I could potentially sell the house and make money or move up the property ladder.
I would argue that the preference for buying a home can be seen as positive from both a personal and an economic perspective. From a personal point of view, owning a home is aspirational, and owner-occupiers are more likely to take pride in their properties and keep them in better condition than a tenant would. For example, many British home owners spend huge amounts of time planting flowers, mowing lawns and sculpting hedges to make their front gardens look pleasant, but few renters do this. Home ownership is also positive from an economic perspective because it motivates people to work hard to pay off their mortgages and own their homes outright before retirement. A workforce of motivated, industrious and diligent people is clearly beneficial for both companies and the economy as a whole.
In conclusion, I fully understand people’s desire to own their own homes, and I see this as a positive aspiration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70569620253 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6529842043 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9599696527 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254978647617 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957551204311 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562920442423 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172176781034 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354200129662 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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