Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes.
In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Adulthood is an unavoidable progress in every single life, since many people have said that the bonds between parents and children will change as this progress goes on. From my perspective, this could lead to some implications for parents' roles in every part of their children's lives, which are detailed below.
First and foremost, the differences in parents' role in their children's stages are obvious. Before adulthood, children are significantly dependent, but becoming more mature shares the same meaning as becoming more independent from parents. Adult people are able to make decisions without the intervention of their mothers and fathers. In addition, parents might take responsibility for their kids since they were not mature enough for everything they did. However, those who are sufficiently mature, for example, at 18 years old, they have to be careful in everything they do, for an action in an impulsive moment can send them to jail surely.
On the other hand, letting children be responsible for their lives doesn't mean abandoning them. Actually, parents can give some useful and wise advice to their children, as the words of experienced ones are more powerful. Furthermore, children still need a model role to follow to become properly mature. Without an appropriate one to imitate and learn from, they would fall away and be misled on the way to adulthood.
In summary, in my opinion, parents should let their children learn how to be adults without distancing or isolating them. Children should be taught to respect and appreciate their parents' relationship with them, as it may play a role in them becoming truly adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: unavoidable progress
Adulthood is an unavoidable progress in every single life, since many people...
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...children be responsible for their lives doesnt mean abandoning them. Actually, parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, for example, in addition, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16479400749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71670636696 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2727248496 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328619991105 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125229472276 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550417717857 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210172550516 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194920897335 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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