Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people are persuading others to be vegetarians or vegans like they are, because of some benefits of this eating habit. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this belief for some detailed reasons below.
There are two main reasons to prove why people should not be full-time vegetarians or vegans. One is that the human digestive system’s design is omnivorous, obviously. The human body can synthesize some types of vitamins but not all, and so can plants and animals. Hence, people need nutrients from both plants and animals in order to grow well. Consequently, plant-free nor meat-free diets could bring some serious health downsides. For example, according to a registered dietitian, Liz Weinandy, plant eaters are likely to have a ‘cholin crisis’, while meat eaters have a higher risk of heart disease than the plant eaters.
In addition, altering savoury-like menus for vegetarian diets is a delusion. One of its outcomes is that, due to their omnivorous nature, people end up deluding themselves into excluding meat from their meals to avoid the feeling of craving meat. Vegetarian foods become substitutes for savoury foods as much as possible. Moreover, since some vitamins can only be found in animals, alternative vitamins synthesized from bacteria are much more expensive and unaffordable for the average income. For example, the group of vitamins B, which are needed to process some chemicals such as lipid and protein, must be absorbed from dairy products, meat, and eggs. Therefore, instead of using these types of vitamins normally, people would pick alternative products with higher prices, which are totally unsuitable for long-term use.
To sum up, I think being a full-time vegetarian or vegan is not a good idea for everybody. We should balance the nutrients from both plants and animals in our meals, and begin to build a healthier diet and eating habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71750055407 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7273230614 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149667835203 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497375255301 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372191053225 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959846683313 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121876891142 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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