In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation
It is true that in some countries, the possession of a private house is more crucial than renting a house. There are many reasons behind this case, and in my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
There are numerous reasons why having a home is exceedingly important for people and many people prefer possessing a home to renting one. Firstly, they can get rid of long - term financial burden. This is due to the fact that we have to pay the rent every month and it will become a large amount of money when we live there for a long time. Moreover, owning a home ensures a stable accommodation for us. Unless we can afford the monthly rent, we will have to leave our house because of money deprivation.
Personally, I would argue that this case could have equal positive and detrimental consequences. On the one hand, people who own a house are beneficial in some ways. Not only does it allow them to live independently but it also helps them have a comfortable life. For example, when we rent a house or an apartment, we always have to worry whether what we do in our home disturbs our neighborhoods or not. However, owning a house can do wonders for our private life and we can do anything in our private house. On the other hand, this trend could become a pressure for young people in our contemporary society. It is true that people must have a large amount of money if they want to buy and own a house. Consequently, the proliferation of the demand to possess a personal accommodation leads to an issue that many young people who have just graduated from universities are placed under high pressure to earn enough money to buy a house and this will, in turn, beget depression and other mental illnesses.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for this trend, and I suppose that this case could have both beneficial and detrimental effects on our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'stable accommodation'.
Suggestion: stable accommodation
...g time. Moreover, owning a home ensures a stable accommodation for us. Unless we can afford the monthl...
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Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'personal accommodation'.
Suggestion: personal accommodation
... proliferation of the demand to possess a personal accommodation leads to an issue that many young peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66091671306 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6617082037 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275973927601 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102615112076 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672966131904 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190758916989 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221125994617 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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