People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
It is true that the consumption of sugary drinks is growing rapidly these days. This essay will discuss a number of reasons behind this trend as well as a variety of feasible methods to curb the rate of sugary drinks consumption in our society.
There are a range of reasons associated with the proliferation of sugar-based drinks consumed. Firstly, this kind of drink is ubiquitous now. Everybody now can keep themselves informed with information about these drinks and purchase them with ease. One obvious example is that commercial and promotion videos of high-profile conglomerates like Coca Cola or Pepsi are all the rage on social media and it is quite easy for us to approach these advertisements. It is also noticeable that all commercial complexes these days have special areas for promoting and selling sugary drinks. Therefore, it is not an uphill task to make these drinks get exposed to their prospective customers. Moreover, sugar-based drinks have vitally delicious taste which appeals to a range of consumers especially children. As a result, people tend to consume them instead of drinking healthier ones.
However, there are a variety of remedies which can be implemented to reduce the consumption of drinks containing a tremendous amount of sugar. One of them is imposing higher taxes on these commodities. This is due to the fact if the price of sugar-based merchandise increased, this would become a disincentive for purchasers to buy and consume them. Furthermore, our society should raise various campaigns to spur the general public to take the detrimental impacts of sugary drinks and benefits of healthy diets into consideration. Unless people gain a deeper insight into the negative effects of drinks containing a huge amount of sugar, they will continue to consume and drink it as much as they do currently. For instance, a host of schools in Vietnam has incorporated these knowledge into curriculums at school and most Vietnamese students acquire the comprehension of drawbacks of drinking sugar-based items including increasing the risk of obesity and other cardiovascular diseases. Consequently, this could become a deterrent for schoolchildren to drink sugary products and spur them to follow healthier diets which do wonders for their health.
In conclusion, there are a number reasons related to the increasing consumption of in our society, and some feasible methods could be taken to decrease this pattern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03161079903 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0795290658 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235949245304 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830241711761 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595918668324 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128491881057 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740867602855 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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