In some countries, owning a home rather that renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think is a positive or negative situation?
Some argue that several countries have consensus that the ownership of personal home is as more imperative as renting. There are many causes of this concern and I believe that it represents more positive outcomes.
In general, a temporary habitat is in a great demand, albeit it has some drawbacks. Firstly, people in some nations are thriving of having permanent houses which means that they are, without doubt, worried about losing their shelters in case of having no money for rent. Another reason for this could be the standard of living in my country is relatively higher in which owning private houses is the sign of luxury and therefore, the owner of the house may be a credit to his friends and family. Finally, house owners can share their rooms with others for profitable and non-profitable purposes.
It is not uncommon to see that thanks for having permanent houses, people are less criticized and more honored by the public. Despite requiring lesser amount of money, rented home may cost a fortune for inhabitants in the long term. The majority of people definitely have positive attitude towards their private houses due to being valuable assets for the family which could be passed from one generation to another. In my country, one of the challenges faced by citizens is finding rented homes in the center of cities in reasonable prices. For this reason, people attempt to own houses in these places to survive, not to mention receiving respect.
In conclusion, the ownership of houses is of importance for having better life and public respect compared to dwelling in the temporary habitats. I believe that owners of houses would have better experiences and robust confident towards their future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03157894737 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55122708091 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6231053268 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244307311465 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844554573455 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427764821023 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140078017395 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695043570974 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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