In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is said that renting a house is not important as owning one in a number of countries. There are several reasons for the notion ond I personally believe it's an overall good trend that will be explained in the essay.
To begin with, house is a valuable property along with vehicles and other business. People in some countries, especially Eastern ones, usually consider that owning a house means you have a good annual income and you don't have to worry about retirement. Furthermore, many people prefer their own houses as they're comfortable to do anything ranging from maintenance to decorating or even rebuilding a new house. In contrary, people who rent houses always have to ask for permission of landlords to change anything about the houses. Therefore, some people would love to own a house as
it's a symbol of freedom and prosperity.
In general, owning or renting depends on people's needs. For instance, the elderly often want a house for their own before they retire, hence they have a safe place for the rest of their lives. However in some cases of young and working generations, especially whose jobs require a large amount of travelling, renting a house is a better choice as they needn't take full responsibility of the house and less money is spent on accomodation. However, owning-a-house trend happens to be a positive one since people tend to feel safer with their own belonging and no need to
worry about being homeless, which young generation may consider as crucial thing later.
To conclude, a number of advantages have made up to a statement that owning a house is more vital than rending one. In my perspective, this is a positive case as it can claim for stable life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in general, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81911262799 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7143600263 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6935199334 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254997537482 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982092791287 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490048111137 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113216891677 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072654384268 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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