In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
The world's population is divided into 2 groups how and where to live: these who live in their own house and who liv in rented accomodation. There are positive and negative sides in this position. We will discuss these two aspects one by one.
Firstly, we will speak to live in their own house. There are a lot of positive situations to live in own home. Because own home is yourself. No one can evict you from your home. Also, own home is very comfortable and very large for you. You have your own room in your house and no one but you can enter it. In addition, if you have a large garden in your house, then you can do something. That, too, is a positive thing.
To live in rented accomodation. There are lots of negative sides to live in rented accomodation. Because, the people who to live in rented accomodation should pay money every month. In addition, if you do not pay money every month, you could evict you flat. Continue, live in flat is caused much stress. Because, there are lots of noise. If your neighbor have a party, the noise of the party will shake your house and as a result you get angry. That, too, would be a negative situation.
In conclusion, the people who is own house, this is a positive condition than to live in rented accomodation. Because there are positive situations to live in own house. There are lots of negative conditions to live in rented accomodation. If people live in own home, there are not a lot of stress and they live long.
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...ositive situations to live in own home. Because own home is yourself. No one can evict ...
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...o one but you can enter it. In addition, if you have a large garden in your house...
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...f you have a large garden in your house, then you can do something. That, too, is...
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...ue, live in flat is caused much stress. Because, there are lots of noise. If your neigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39926739927 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46152755972 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421245421245 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3662411215 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.2173913043 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8695652174 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292452126005 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10176986342 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693114795781 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185273077129 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475823750301 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.92 8.58950901804 69% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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