In some countries, private cars are banned fro certain city centers. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?
The government of certain countries have prohibited the entry of private cars in city center premises, whereas some other nation’s governments are not moving so strongly against the rules regarding personal cars at city centers. I believe that the cars coming to city centers should be in controlled numbers, instead of just banning it right away.
Due to the onset of globalization, the city centers have become a hub for multinational organization’s offices, where thousands of employees come to work, some of whom may live far away from the city. There is an utmost need of a personal vehicle for such people to commute to work daily on time. The fact that not every country’s public transport is so well developed or fully capable of carrying a large number of people to work reliably every day also calls for the need to opt for private vehicles. For example, in my country, India, despite best efforts of government, one can easily find themselves struggling to find a place to even stand on the metro trains.
Despite the benefits that cars provide to humans, we should limit their usage and not be over reliant on them. First of all, they are a major source of the increasing level of air pollution in the environment. Secondly, the presence of a large number of cars often leads to ugly traffic jams, which make it impossible to reach anywhere on scheduled time ever. For instance, in India, such is the crisis of road transport in certain cities that it takes over two hours just to cover a mere 30 kilometers.
So, to conclude, in my opinion, the need for such drastic measures like banning the cars completely is not imminent in every city, and the governments can instead limit their numbers and solve this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'despite the best'.
Suggestion: despite the best
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... environment. Secondly, the presence of a large number of cars often leads to ugly traffic jams, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75039189127 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3288128831 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195753590126 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703855898779 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658083817183 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125606811006 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795238113434 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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