some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
In this Era, education sectors have been emphasizing upon evolution of studying, that would brings a lot of benefits for students. In some Nations undergraduates pay their University fees ,while others say that, administration should pay for them. I believe that, merits of paying fees through authority outweight the demerits.
On one hand ,the foundation of any sagacious country is its education system ,there is a no doubt that, authorities are affording tuition fees because of that , there are multitude of benefits individual as well as Nations : equality - there is no different between poor and rich people because fees are paid by authorities; students are are able to more emphasize upon their curriculum on account of without do not need to worry about tutoring fees and government ought to allocate public funds to improve education fields. Moreover, advanced equipment will be provided by authorities to college because it is helping for students . For an example India, where, administration have been paying sums of funds upon education and giving free tutoring for all undergraduate students ,although education is key to unlock the golden door of freedom. Also, having good infrastructure of Universities and colleges most of student have got job in fortune 500 countries compared to other Nation , this is becoming successful.
On the other hand ,nowadays all parents want their children study in self Finance rather than Public Schools. It is unnecessary when tuition fees are paid by governments for all student because students are being lack of responsibility in studying. University students are mature enough to handle their own curriculum cost, government could provide student loan which will be helpful after graduation. The epitome of this is Canada where government large amount of money is paying out on other areas such as Health Care, security and infrastructure.
To conclude, there are some disadvantage when government pay student's fee so governments should pay those student's fess , who are living in poverty line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38819875776 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94201946116 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.833548744 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422870060898 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15760534646 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124025475323 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289202182396 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748644869865 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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