In developed countries, education supports the view that youth should have GAP year means that an academic year, taken by a student as a break between the secondary school and higher education. Generally, it brings much more benefits than harms for them to do this.
The first gain is experience, which is collected while working or travelling, supplies to youth many valuable lessons in their lives. During this period, they would contact many kinds of people in numerous circumstances. Everywhere that they go over, teaches them different cultures, languages, life skills, ... The accumulation of experience contributes to open students' awareness. It is truly useful for young people in their learning. Also, after gathering experience, they easily choose which department of the university is suitable for them or which one they like. It seems like a graceful way of career orientation to decide the future occupation, On the other hand, the student might find that study is not eventually accurate choice. Money can be made by common labours' job without the education. Youth will not want to school and rush to labour to make money. This causes to their future development such as low-learning, low salary, promotion opportunities, ... These advantages and disadvantages affect significantly to their education.
In addition, GAP year either affect the lifestyle of students who take it. Everybody would have met up with them, show the different character, personality, lifestyle, ... It is beneficial and also harmless to young people. For an instant, they can not know that which kind of people they will meet, maybe a lawyer with terms and exceptions, a teacher with his knowledge or a businessman with his achievement, ... who can offer meaningful things for them, a kind of good person. In contrast, there is still a drunker drinks alcohol day-by-day, the unemployment is dissapointed with life or a pessimist with their weird opinion. Although which kind of person that they meet, it may cause 2 sides of the issue - bad or good - that be unforseen circumstances. It is not only a challenge but also a chance to find out themselves, their purpose of life. A precious opportunity for enjoying or facing things that can be unanticipated.
To conclude, it consists of the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. However, the disadvantages are not really serious, people can prepare before perform GAP year. More countries should encourage this manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, while, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22807017544 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9587830599 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576441102757 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1951453451 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.44 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26869506925 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758725616508 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102891410414 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202024691205 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130370922806 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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