Growing obsession with educate in higher academic level is now common among people all around the world in all social stands. The tendency to the mentioned issue is probably has lied down in a variety of aspects spreading out between youngsters and their parents in order to achieve numerous benefits which result from higher level of education. In most developed countries people are incline to accomplish their educational steps without any interval which is partially different among counterparts living in developing countries.
Obviously, according in demand of progress in diverse contexts, educated people with university degrees would definitely play a significant role in this fact. Evidence and studies, Nevertheless, suggest that if we are looking for social development and prosperity, we need to consider all aspects of life and also, we need a variety type of occupations. This perspective is contrary to the fact of developing countries that the higher education level you achieve, the more facilities and convenience you would have.
Regarding the title, in my opinion the gap year between the last year of high school and the first year of university could be an efficient and considerable opportunity for pupils in order to encounter to diverse type of stages and conditions those he/she has not experienced before. It’s quite likely that they found themselves involved in a specific carrier requires numerous practical trainings somewhere outside of academic environment. Moreover, this interval could be a beneficial opportunity for whom need to rest after dozen educational years and young adult who looking for the best choice about his/her future educational plan.
To sum up, I believe for having an ideal society not only government should set the stage for people by providing exploited opportunities and take a variety of beneficial factors into account, but also, we need thoughtful people to decide carefully about their social future with paying attention to facilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... to the mentioned issue is probably has lied down in a variety of aspects spreading ...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...opportunity for whom need to rest after dozen educational years and young adult who l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44551282051 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88452813258 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0219047289 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.9 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226840262632 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769608662799 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553401122138 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12620644172 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481082274171 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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