Growing obsession with education, especially in higher academic level, has dramatically increased among people include a vast variety of social positions. Throughout history, societies had classified females in a lower rank of social standing in comparison with males consistent on some religious belief and conventional regulations. In time, females could achieve their rights and find a suitable social place in order to contribute in numerous crucial decisions which can play a key role in governing a country.
According to the topic, I believe there is not a significant difference between males and females in diverse context of life’s responsibilities. In my opinion, both genders have a considerable capability in order to accomplish their goals and also, it is of necessity to have a positive collaboration between men and women to create a brighter future. Likewise, it is clarified that all societies need to exploit human resources in order to fulfill the ambitions.
I have to admit, nevertheless, that in spite of all beneficial aspects of considering males and females equally -- social justice, qualitative improvement of life, create a competitive atmosphere – on the one hand, we need to regard some of the individual capabilities those which are more noticeable among specific gender. For instance, nursing and cooking are an occupation those which are virtually appropriate for women or for example mining engineering and firefighting are more relevant with men abilities.
On the other hand, universities should admit applicants due to their abilities, qualification and educational background rather than which gender they are. In consequence, to the considerable extent, I disagree with the admission of male and female equally in universities although I believe we have to exploit both gender capabilities due to mentioned factors. In this case, the educational system should provide ample opportunities for all types of people from different backgrounds and intentions in order to choose their academic field without gender discrimination.
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 89
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...re – on the one hand, we need to regard some of the individual capabilities those which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61146496815 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25979965286 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9168120352 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.181818182 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116948598402 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459117964463 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538106662358 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682342126293 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436324213101 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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