Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language ot primary school rather than secondary school.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language ot primary school rather than secondary school.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In various nations around the world while, many people have different traditional customs with including dresses, food, culture and especially language. Language is a major way of communicating with each other and transmit their data and information. so anyone can learn multi-languages in additionally of themselves native tongue, Even child. Such as, some masters think that it is suitable for learning another language at primary school rather than secondary school. But thinking logically, it has a plethora of pros and cons. However, I strongly believe that how to be fluent of foreign language learning at basic school.

Turning to the negative side, There are few drawbacks to students learning in non-indigenous language at earliest colleges than secondary school. The first factor is, kids could not keep their attention properly while learning another tongue and beginning of school teaching process was not standard and no more any curriculum. Consequently, offspring learnt devious way and theories.

On the other hand, various benefits can be noted. Firstly, studying non-native tongue could cause to kids to feel easy things so what is the reason, when this time, they did not know well their mother language. Secondly, children could reach fluent of that non-endemic language because children were knowledge seekers. As a result, teachers and parents had been more probability to teach a foreign language in base school.

To sum up, considering the above paragraphs, I can say clearly, It has many advantages non-native language studying preschool more important than secondary school outweigh disadvantages.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54618473896 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87226377535 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2801151494 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337030610736 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101503498119 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109892054894 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18910962972 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582410741617 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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