Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is better for students to begin learning a foreign language at primary school than secondary school. Although there are some particular disadvantages, the benefits of students learning a foreign language in elementary school are overshadowed for a number of reasons.
Admittedly, there are some transparent drawbacks of learning foreign languages in primary school. First and foremost, it makes children confused about many things. This is because children at this age often learn foreign languages, which will make them confused when learning in their mother tongue. Another reason is that learning a foreign language requires children to do many demanding tasks such as learning a new language which can cause cognitive overload or overwhelm children.Furthermore, and more importantly, learning a foreign language can slow down the child's language development process, leading to language disorders or language confusion. In fact, learning a foreign language causes children to lose most of their time learning their mother tongue. Children will lack words in communication and have to borrow words from other languages. As a result, they will experience serious consequences in communication.
Despite the aforementioned negative aspects, the values do not pale in comparison. One of them is that children are more enthusiastic than adults. The reason lies in this stage, children are more open, receptive to new things and want to go to school every day. Another point to discuss is that children may have a competitive edge in learning. This could explain that they may have stronger skills, creativity, and working memory. Take my friend for example. He was taught foreign languages in elementary school and he said he learned many good things about languages. As a result, his reading skills are more advanced than those of his monolingual peers.
Overall, although there are some perceived advantages, the disadvantages of learning a foreign language still need to be considered.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, second, so, still, thus, for example, in fact, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47115384615 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01666251212 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.844969893 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461379170229 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137099913398 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147848124122 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29259261244 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13923454545 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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