Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and predicts consequences?
Several statistical findings have highlighted the trend that cities around the world are becoming increasingly larger. This essay will suggest some main reasons and possible outcomes of this trend.
One of the chief contributors to the expanding of cities would be the fast-growing population. As the population is booming, there is an urgent need for production to feed a large number of people. Apart from the forming of new cities, existing ones continue to grow larger in size to accommodate an increasing population. Another possible cause would be the fact that key industries, which offer large proportion of employment opportunity, often concentrate around large metropolises. As a consequence, floods of people who are searching for jobs will likely to move to large these areas to make a living.
There are many repercussions that a heavily-populated city may bring. Firstly, it exacerbates the problem of insufficient housing and transport facilities. In fast-developing cities like Ho Chi Minh city, for example, people are struggling to afford a house and a large proportion of the working population are living in dreadful accommodation. Secondly, there will be fierce competition for jobs in nearly every sphere. This will lead to a situation where the ablest candidates will be selected, while the rest of other competent but less satisfactory ones will be forced to take on the job which would not make the best use of the potential, or even worse, does not relate to their majors. Another undesirable result would be the detrimental effects on the environment. Overpopulation in cosmopolitan areas leads to a greater amount of carbon dioxin emitting, coupled with the heavy industrial gas emission from factories in the vicinity.
In conclusion, a growing population and the convergence of industrial areas around a city are the main reasons explaining the growing of it. This development would bring several consequences to individuals and the environment as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s an urgent need for production to feed a large number of people. Apart from the forming of new ...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
... cities, existing ones continue to grow larger in size to accommodate an increasing population...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36102236422 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2029865413 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5451485957 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147424179313 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490841312426 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624614042421 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115761881497 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068978491954 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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