Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
In the global era, most of companies utilize advertisement for promoting their products. The important aspect of product advertising are innovation, creativity, as well as out of the box. However, some creativity in product advertising was alleged as amoral and contradict with social values which it was believed by the society. In my view, I agree to the statement that nowadays many advertisements in numerous countries was categorized as unethical and unacceptable by the society. I hold this view for some reasons which are set out below.
To begin with, I would like to argue that the flourish of advertising occur due to the there are many countries in the world just concern to regulate the advertisement regarding the number of tax, albeit they alpha for intervening the standard of moral which it should be implemented by the advertiser. Therefore, the absence of the government to regulate it, the advertisement frequently opposite to the society’s norms. Referring to Research Centre for Media Studies University of Manchester stated that most of Islamic states are opposite to the vulgar advertising which the content utilized by most western fashion companies for promoting their products to numerous countries.
Moreover, according to The Guardians informed that some African countries banned some product advertising which it was charged had tarnished local cultures.
On the other hand, people would optimists that the phenomenon advertising product in the contemporary era have been acceptable by the society. Nonetheless, there is a little evidence to support this view.
Taking everything into consideration, I agree to the statement above. I hold this view because some advertising products tend to contradict with local values and local culture which it believed by the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
In the global era, most of companies utilize advertisement for promoting the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46975088968 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08025157209 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7881833303 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244280350636 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957439178374 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606546755676 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144116614946 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062593387263 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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