Some parents prefer to have their children be raised by their grandparents. Some prefer to raise them on their own. Which would you prefer and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
There is no doubt that children often develop as better humans under the love and supervision of the whole family. While few parents choose to groom their children under their influence, others argue that grandparents should also be involved in raising them. I do not completely agree with these views and would support my explanation with relevant examples.
On the one hand, children who are brought up by their parents tend to accomplish much in life. This is because parents are from the modern era which helps them understand the needs and priorities of their young ones. For example, a study by the UK news channel reported that the group of children under the supervision of parents turned out to be more focussed and obedient. As a result, they excelled in different dimensions of life. However, over-discipline may also work adversely for children, because they need a stress free, joyful environment for their overall growth and development.
On the other hand, those who receive love and affection of grandparents are the blessed ones. The reason is that these aged people have seen many ups and downs in life, which make them value and pamper their grandchildren. For instance, I was fortunate to have my grandparent’s love and attention, which made me realize the importance of family. In contrast, excessive pampering may turn kids into an unreasonable and stubborn person, that is why they also need parent’s strict monitoring, which in turn lead them to a path of success. Another interesting observation is that, whether a child is under the supervision of parents or grandparents, a number of diverse environmental factors also play a crucial role in their neuro-cognitive development.
In conclusion, while children grow as more confident and focussed individuals under the guidance of parents, I believe they also need the right amount of love and care from grandparents that would develop them into a balanced human being.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16037735849 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98064275633 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1287071193 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222338647864 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762136882698 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641996397479 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134070716952 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545589972188 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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