Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s life style? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
There is no doubt that in this modern era farming has lost it’s importance due to sophisticated trading centres coming up everywhere in nations. This change is leading to serious problems in many nations. While it is observed that, many farmlands are being replaced by business centres, this may have an influence on natural habitat and person’s life. In this essay, I will discuss two problems that arise due to this change and propose some ways to mitigate this issue.
Firstly, continuous decrease in farmland areas lead to bad influence on our habitat. This is because, deforestation leads to soil erosion, which in turn makes healthy land unfavourable for agricultural purposes. Furthermore, this overcrowding and commercialization of cities are leading to imbalance in our ecosystem. For example, in my opinion, I am still healthy with strong immune system, because of fresh air and newly harvested fruits-vegetables in farmlands surrounding my city. The solution for this is that, government authorities should imply strict rules and penalties against buying or selling agricultural lands for commercial purpose. They can provide lands for such activities in centre of cities, thus leaving outskirts for farming purposes.
Secondly, lives of individual’s are getting affected by development of these modern trade centres. The reason for this is, food crisis affecting people, which is due to reduced farming areas. Moreover, these lands are responsible to maintain balance in demand and supply of food and vegetables, which has declined at fast pace. For instance, study done by one of United Kingdom’s news channel reported that, people who lived in cities which lost their agricultural grounds faced major food shortage, thus taking help from neighbouring states. The solution is that, people should be aware about hiked prices and chemical adulterations of food items done by business companies. Those people should promote idea of buying fresh from local farmer’s market, which would help them monetarily and boost their confidence.
However, farming and commercial centres both hold an important place in development of modern society and is beneficial to every human being.
In conclusion, while commercial activities are causing environmental deterioration and food crisis, people and government authorities must play a strict role in controlling this imbalance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59726027397 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06793781668 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5011110947 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245144405229 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768327797912 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472798162987 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118031756412 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653481113558 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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