Some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People opinions differ as to whether preschool children should be taken care by childcare centers or old members of the family such as grandparents. In my opinion, the children could receive benefits from both ways of looking after them.
On one hand, the services offered by many kindergartens are highly convenient and modern. The parents can fully commit to their work without worrying about their children, hence boosting productivity. In this day and age, all educational services are examined regularly in order to maintain the highest standard. The teachers, for instance, are trained carefully prior to officially taking the job and they will be inspected several times each year by the education councils. Besides, letting children interact with the outside world at the early ages can create huge and important impacts on their development because not only does it help to interact with peers that could become long-standing friendships but also stimulate creativity.
On the other hand, grandparents and other family members can also be good caregivers. They are the older people who have a great amount of experience in tackling daily problems; therefore, all the issues raised by the children could be addressed easily. Furthermore, if the parents decide to leave their children to grandparents, they can save money, especially the poor family which does not have a wealthy background. Not only that, parents may reap rewards for great performance and punctuality when they do not need to take children to school and pick them up which constitute quite lots of their time.
In conclusion, I believe that the merits of both methods of taking care of children at early ages are equal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People opinions differ as to whether preschool children should be taken care...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75670200336 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9974304895 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2705424125 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920685127981 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501189703245 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148930449075 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454294078054 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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