Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, the number of working both parents is on the rise. It has created a dilemma for the parents that should they send the children to day care or put the burden on grandmother and grandfather. This essay will discuss both views and will suggest that childcare centres are more beneficial for children.
Firstly, day care providers are professional with trained staff. Their employees are aware of the needs of young kids, Such as, their food and sleep timings. Also, group activities will teach different games and will educate kids on how to behave with each other. As a result, children will learn to collaborate and coordinate with other kids.
Secondly, the facilities at these centres are constructed by keeping in mind the safety of the toddlers. For example, there will be no sharp things or edges that can harm a young one. Even, in the case of any mishap, the attendant will know how to keep calm and provide care to the child.
On the other hand, child is more attached to grandparents. That’s why, it is easy to let them leave there. Grandparents will be more caring than an unknown person because of blood relation with children. Thus, kids will feel that they are staying at their on location than to stay at strange place.
Another thing is that grandparents know eating habits of their children more than anyone else. Thus, it gives them flexibility to feed children with the food they love, plus it saves them from any food allergies or complications.
In conclusion, the welfare and good care of the young ones is the main goal that can be achieved at the child care facility or by grandparents but they day care staff is more experienced so they should be preferred.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, another thing, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76430976431 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5347699437 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0847714947 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2352941176 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240468497296 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786918111109 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608771252038 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122892488142 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835582543667 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.